NY Times writers redundantly ignore freshman comp professors’ advice about adverbs
“The bullet tore through the little girl’s head and neck. Sadly, she could not be saved.”
Mr. Blow, you should have said “disastrously, she could not be saved.”
“The bullet tore through the little girl’s head and neck. Sadly, she could not be saved.”
Mr. Blow, you should have said “disastrously, she could not be saved.”
