bad writing
Jeffrey Eugenides in the New Yorker:
“There was something creepy about one guy’s face––it was like a baby’s face that had hideously aged”
A guy is an aged baby, so this sentence is just a lengthy version of “one guy had a hideous face.”
Jeffrey Eugenides in the New Yorker:
“There was something creepy about one guy’s face––it was like a baby’s face that had hideously aged”
A guy is an aged baby, so this sentence is just a lengthy version of “one guy had a hideous face.”
